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Bee-fore and After Posters

School: Mary O. Pottenger School

City/State: Springfield, MA

Grade(s): 3

Format(s): Diagram

Subject(s): Science and Technology, Visual Arts

Project Overview

These illustrations of bees were done by third-grade students from Mary O. Pottenger Elementary School in Springfield, Massachusetts as part of a learning expedition. At the start of the expedition, before they learned anything about bees, students were asked to draw a picture of a bee. At the end of the expedition each student did a detailed scientific illustration of a bee and compared it to his or her original depiction. Both versions are displayed on these posters, highlighting the growth of student knowledge and skill – the Bee-fore and the After diagrams.

The difference between the illustrations is striking. Although the before and after drawings both have wings, a body and two antenna, the similarities stop there. The second shows a detailed understanding of bee anatomy, including position and shape of legs, shape and coloring of wings, size and shape of head and eyes, etc. These drafts show the transformation of students into beginning scientists, working to create scientific illustrations rather than simply cartoon drawings.

To produce the “after” drawing, each student engaged in multiple forms of investigation and spent much time critiquing each other’s work and revising multiple drafts. 

How This Project Can Be Useful

  • Dramatic representation of student growth in knowledge and skills
  • Powerful model of the untapped capacity of students – the improvement between graphs is astounding – making us question our standards for final draft work
  • Shows the great value in multiple drafts of work, with learning done in between
  • Demonstrates the power of critique and revision
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